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See the above news post - we finished our melo lineart!
Posted by Jack
(#1) on Sun Sep 5, 2010 1:58pm
- Acid Sound
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Posted on: Sun Sep 5, 2010 4:03pm
I think it looks good :3
the toes and nose it still a bit weird tho =s
oh btw, when the new lineart will be in, will al my pets be cchanged in this lineart? o3o
I like the old lineart for some of my pets X3
- Acid Sound
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Posted on: Sun Sep 5, 2010 4:08pm
ah I know what bothers me on the face lD
the little line above the nose between the eyes make him kinda look like he has a flat face =/
but seriously! I love your art ^^
keep going, this is starting to look great! 8D
- AbelPhee
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Posted on: Sun Sep 5, 2010 4:21pm
pretty much what everyone else is saying. I'm not a fan of this at all.
The head mostly, especially with the ears and face. The ears are all flopped and pointed in the same direction (wind-blown effect XD ) I really hate the nose. The face looks kinds swollen and unbalanced, while the head doesn't quite look attached the neck right. (Too far out?)
I like the tail and the majority of the body. The hind quarters may be a bit too small though.
- AbelPhee
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Posted on: Sun Sep 5, 2010 4:26pm
also, IMO, I liked the thinner legs in the old lineart. It makes the Melo look a little bit more proportionate and have a better stance. The back leg on the new lineart doesn't look grounded/ on the same plane as the others to me.
But that's just me ^^;;
- AARON MOVED TO 782
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Posted on: Sun Sep 5, 2010 4:41pm
Well, the second one is cute but the cheek fluff sticks out wayyyy too much
- SammyGirl
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Posted on: Sun Sep 5, 2010 4:42pm
I like version 1 much better, but it does need some changes. I saw lots opf great redlines on the suggestions thread, and I contributed my own. I think that out of all of them you'll be able to make something super cool out of version 1.
I'm not a big fan of version 2. >> No offense
- Sparky
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Posted on: Sun Sep 5, 2010 4:46pm
The ear fur is better on Version 2, but the cheeks... well, they're better on version 1.
- WinterSweet
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Posted on: Sun Sep 5, 2010 4:54pm
I like the first one but I prefer the ear fluff of the second.
- Miah The Storm Wolf
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Posted on: Sun Sep 5, 2010 5:11pm
Cute as it is, the pointy cheeks on #2 just don't look right to me.
Posted on: Sun Sep 5, 2010 3:57pm
I like it but feel the far ear is a bit off I don't know how you would fix it but as it is now looks a little unnatural to me....